Abandoned Farmhouse
By Ted Kooser
Words Underlined: broken dishes, God-fearing, lilacs, tractor tire, lonely, sealed jars
Woman Walking
Kathy Heim
A woman walks alone following dry, cracked,
Tire tracks left to settle in a barren field
She Looks for a past blown away with the wind,
Wondering where her life went twisty
And when it turned to pieces like
Broken dishes heaped in a pile,
each a fragment of her.
Some jagged, stripped of soft edges,
Lonely, dangerous, and warning.
No one picks these ones,
They come with a warning.
Leave me alone they shout.
But the rounded ones, they
Beg to be held, caressed, wanted.
Like lilacs, beautiful, fragrant, delicate,
Displayed in unsealed jars to be admired, desired.
The woman heads home praying to God
For a path ahead to put herself back together
Before returning home.
I love this line, Kathy: "She Looks for a past blown away with the wind." You did a beautiful job of using Kooser's words, but what is intriguing is your tone, which is reminiscent of Kooser's own voice in his poem -- the smoothness of it. Good job!
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