playing with poetry and repetition...
The Footbridge
By: Kathy Heim
Every time we pass the footbridge
By the pond where ducks and turtles
Sun on cement drains,
Molly lunges at the leash, pulling
Towards the sculpture of The Stages of Life.
Every time we pass the footbridge,
When the air is warm, but the grass is wet,
And a mid morning sun casts shadows,
She checks for muddy water, stagnant and waiting
For her to plunge in, her squatty body Wiggling
Stooping chest high. She hides behind the
Silky overgrown grass, stays for a satisfying soak.
Every time we pass the footbridge
Where the only sounds are occasional commuter trains,
Chirping birds, or quacks of a duck, Molly laps at
Unfiltered water under The Stages of Life.
Every time we pass the footbridge,
Molly hops out, a shaking muddy mess,
Prancing, she returns to the path towards home.
Clicking with each footstep, sniffing each chance,
Enjoying the sun on her back.
Every time we pass that footbridge,
I wonder, will she grow
Out of this stage of life?
The repetition works so well in your poem, Kathy. Also nice use of active verbs. You capture Molly's curiosity and energy. Including the sculpture is a very nice touch as well.
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