10 Minutes Writing Exercise #2 by Marc
Luis had been in the U.S. for a year, having snuck across the Southern Border one moonlit night. He believed that any country foolish enough not to patrol their borders deserved to have happen to them what he and his colleagues had planned.
The day had finally arrived, and the plans had been finalized. Luis had the van gas tank filled yesterday, and double checked the explosives in the back of the van.
He was willing to give his life up for the cause that he believed in, just hoping to take as many Godless Americans with him.
So easy, so easy he thought, as he rode towards his target.
His GPS led him into the community, and he soon spotted the children and their parents walking toward the large tent, where Halloween treats awaited.
He gunned the engine, mowing down innocents as he roared toward the tent, thinking;
“God is great!”
Good job. Unfortunately all too true.
ReplyDeleteBrings me back to your previous piece and wonder what happened to his wife and child. Only an evil man would do what he did in your first piece.
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