Totally unfinished!! I'm trying to play with an interactive story of sorts, told in PowerPoint/Google Slides. Just playing :)
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Sunday, February 18, 2024
Love in a Strip Joint - Mike P
Love in a Strip Joint
(sung to the tune of Aerosmith’s Love in an Elevator)
My luck with the lottery ran dry before it started. Played it 3 times
and never hit the grand prize. Made me think I was chasing
rainbows and leprechauns. My keister was parked on a bar stool
next to a guy at Cabaret East. “Look pal, he said, I work at Dallas
Gold & Silver and have this magic gold tooth. You know, Jack
and the Bean Stalk shtick---magic beans, magic tooth. It’ll grow
hell for leather.” He fished it out of his pocket and showed me. “I
paid two grand for it, but since I like you, you can have it for
1900—it will bring you luck. I swear.” I scratched my head on
that one, but it did make sense. If you can’t trust a stranger in a
strip joint, who can you trust?
I forked out the cash and he gave me the tooth. I gave it a good
eyeballing and stuffed it in my pocket I could feel its low and
steady vibration. Magic gold teeth will do that. Everybody knows.
I made a beeline for home. I scratched out a small hole in my
backyard, dropped the gold tooth in, and then covered it with dirt.
Back inside I peeked out the kitchen window. Watched the clock
and waited. Watched some more. Waited some more. Always
been OCD on clock watching. And then suddenly my house
quivered and did an Elvis hip-shake. Backyard cracked open
and up sprung a full-grown tree trunk. It shot straight up a good
10-12 feet and then filled out on all sides. Looked like a golf
umbrella peppered with teeny weeny gold tooth buds.
By the next morning those tiny buds had grown to adult molars,
incisors, and canines! With gold being almost $2 grand an ounce,
I’d soon have enough money to shameless flout and wallow in my
new-found riches. A tisket a tasket, I picked up a green and
yellow basket and you know the rest. Filled with teeth I skipped
back into Dallas & Gold and Silver and sashayed out with a
bucket of cold, hard cash!.”
I wasn’t greedy after that, so I waited a spell. Sat tight on my
new-found riches and harvested my gold tooth tree only when it
fully blossomed. Several months passed. I was flush with cash
and my bathtub brimming with teeth. It was early spring, a time
some think to find love. And where better than Cabaret East!
The hotbed of passion with the stench of stale urine hanging in
the air. But I went for their killer Valentine’s day lunch buffet and
an overdue hello to Bruno.
I had just pounded down my first drink and was munching on
brown, wilted lettuce when I noticed a blond feverishly working a
pole. Working it like Picasso going to town on a canvas. I blinked
once. I blinked twice. I even blinked thrice. “Bruno, is that…..”
“Yep, she’s back….they all come back,” he said with a smarmy
smirk.
We made eye contact. Oh yah, it was Coco. She then stared off
into the smokey darkness with eyes of one who hated for just
being born. A life buried in despair. Where hope found no
quarter. Destined to work the strip joints and crack houses
peppered along North Industrial Blvd. Living in the homeless
camp just east of the Elements.
Using my best Edward G. Robinson voice, I said, “yah, see that
the dame gets this, yah, see that she does” and I slid a freshly
grown gold molar to Bruno. I pulled down the brim of my fedora,
gave a perfunctory nod, and strolled out of Cabaret East for last
time.
Polling for Love - Mike P
Polling for Love
(sung to Nazareth’s Love Hurts)
The city bus rumbled to a stop, and he got out. Shook off the cold
and went inside. Every eye took a walk all over him. Here to case
the joint or pull a robbery now? From his pocket out came a
tooth. A big honking molar. Solid gold tooth in mint condition.
Passed down from his great grandfather, who grave-robbed a
gypsy in Transylvania. But times now, they were hard and cash, it
was short. Often since his criminal conviction as Chief Financial
Officer of Enron had he cried out to the heavens, “hard times,
don’t come around here no more!”
But that was then, and this is now. Sprung from the federal pen
almost a year ago. He’d become a regular at adult bookstores
and strip joints dotted along North Industrial Blvd. Surprisingly,
that was proving not to be a path to eternal enlightenment. He
now had plans. Big plans! And they started now with this tooth.
He plopped it down on the counter. ‘How much?” The Dallas
Gold and Silver sales rep looked incredulous. But upon closer
examination and a lot of head scratching, he looked up and said,
“$1,700…take it or leave it.”
He jammed the bills into his pocket and looked up to the clock.
Just 15 minutes before showtime. This was to be his day. His big
day. The day his life turned around and headed north. But for
now, he needed a bus that headed south. Fast. South on North
Industrial.
He was always a clock watcher. His mother said he was
naturally skittish. Said he reminded her of a gerbil rooming with a
tomcat.
Lickety-split, the bus was in front of Cabaret East. His Timex had
taken a lickin’ but kept on tickin’. He had 7 minutes to spare. His
heart pumped faster. He plunked down on a bar stool. Bruno
burped and looked up. “Back again, eh, pal?” “Yep, today’s the
day my life changes …for the good. Hit me with your finest
Frangelico.”
The top of the hour came, and the top of the hour went. He
scratched his head and pounded down a second Frangelico.
“Hey Bruno, where’s Coco? She’s not working the pole.” Bruno
never looked up from the bar, grumbling, “da’ dame done quit on
me. Right out of the blue. Claimed she wanted something better.
Better than this? Can you believe that?”
“No way…she was Baryshnikov on the pole.” “Yah, whatever.
Said she wanted to ‘make something ‘of her life.” Bruno scratched
his head and with a greasy laugh, “they all say that. She’ll be
back. They all come crawling back.”
He hoped Bruno was right. His eyes had long followed her pole
gyrations with canine devotion. He was going to use the money
from his gold tooth to ask her to marry him. Oh sure, they’d never
been out on a date, but that was just a technicality. Never even
actually met. She always smiled and called him handsome John.
That was a head-scratcher. His name wasn’t John. And no one
had ever accused him of being handsome. But he knew she was
honest. Coco would never think of him as a endless tip machine.
Would she?
He watched the clock tick. Watched the arms move. Mind racing,
head down heart breaking, where could his strip joint goddess
be? Stirred his drink with his finger and sighed deeply. Love was
still on the back burner.
Tuesday, February 13, 2024
A Girl and a Map - Susan
This is an expanded version of a story I posted earlier. I wanted to create a stronger sense of setting at the beginning and to tie in the ideas of hope and a new future at the end.
Fila sat on the wide wooden steps of the large white-washed farmhouse, a worn map of the Southern United States resting in her lap. She watched as day broke over fields of dry bark and lint, all that remained of the Alabama cotton crop planted six months ago and harvested just last week. It had been a decent crop, but not enough to convince Fila’s mother to stay and keep working the farm alone. The fields, desolate in the half light of early morning, mirrored Fila’s own mood of bleak acceptance. The land was no longer theirs, having been sold to neighbors, along with all the farm equipment. Save for the barest essentials required for this unwelcome move, the house and everything in it had been sold or given away. Nothing would remain of the family she loved, and nothing of her life in this place would be marked once they turned their faces to the west. Of the livestock, only the two family mules, Jack and Mike, were left. Now they stood hitched to a wagon, waiting patiently to pull two broken hearts to Texas.
Fila knew she should be studying the map, memorizing the route from her birthplace in Girard, Alabama, to her uncle’s farm in Plano, Texas. But her mind was blind to the paper in her hands. She sat, unmoving, and stared down at lines and faded words. They meant nothing to her, and she grieved the paper they were printed on.
This was her father’s map, a good father’s map, and she wondered if he would have led them west had he lived. A moot question now. Her mother saw no future here in Alabama without a husband and income to manage the 40 acres of cotton, not to mention a heavy equipment business that thrived during the War of Northern Aggression, a business doomed after the restless peace of loss descended on them. Her father’s skill at building roads and rail lines for the Confederacy meant an end to the business and its owner.
Fila wondered where this move would lead beyond the miles a wagon train would travel. What good could possibly come from this uprooting of body and soul? From the brokenness of their hearts? Everything but a grave left behind? Fila’s mother, although grieving and anxious about the future, had assured Fila that this move was necessary and not entirely without hope. Their uncle in Texas was a good man who had befriended Fila’s family on more than one occasion. “We will trust the goodness of others and Uncle Ned’s promise to help us,” her mother said with conviction.
Fila was not so convinced as she stared at the map, giving it her full attention now. With her finger, she traced the route they expected to take, starting in Girard to meet up with the wagon train in Columbus, just across the river. From there they would cross Alabama, Mississippi, and Louisiana, then into east Texas, turning north at Dallas and on to Plano. The wagon boss estimated covering 10 miles a day, God willing and the weather held. How far was it, anyway? 800 miles? 900? 80 days minimum. That’s almost three months in a Conestoga wagon. Dear God, how would she ever survive such an ordeal? Yet, here they were.
As Fila folded the map and laid it on the porch step, she saw a young man walking slowly up the path to the farmhouse, a weathered hat in his hand. Fila recognized him as the hired driver of the wagon that would soon take her into her future. As she held out her hand to him, she smiled and said, “I hope you know the way.” Clasping her hand, the young man replied, “Yes, ma’am, I do. Your hope is not misplaced.”
With that, Fila picked up the map from the step, nodded to the young man, and turned back to the farmhouse, her heart a little lighter knowing that, indeed, someone knew the way.
Monday, February 12, 2024
A Christmas Swan Song - Susan
The fir tree stood tall and twinkling next to the mantle decorated with fresh evergreens and fragrant pine cones. The smell of burning wood in the fireplace and a roasting turkey in the oven filled the spacious house, declaring that Christmas Day had arrived. The tree was regal, worthy of the effort it took Evelyn and her son, Roddy, to cut it down on a freezing day in rural Wisconsin. Not for the first time Evelyn’s husband, William, had failed to join them in the snowy woods, saying he had a meeting at the medical school. Over the ten years of life in Wisconsin, Evelyn and Roddy had morphed into a pack of two, with Evelyn trying to make up for both William’s absences and his emotional separation from them. She hoped that the resentment and anxiety that had crept into their marriage might be set aside today, might even be resolved without a permanent rift.
Evelyn wrapped a cashmere shawl around her shoulders and sat down on the ottoman near the fireplace. “You can be Santa, Roddy,” she said to her man-child of 15. As Roddy handed out the presents spread under the tree, Evelyn breathed in the warmth of the comfortable room, the beauty of the art on the walls, and the sounds of a boy choir singing carols in the background.
She picked up the box Roddy had laid beside her. William’s gift. The tag read only her name, not the nickname he gave her when they were newlyweds and still in love. She held the box on her lap, staring at it. A shirt box smelling vaguely of strawberry, no, of vanilla. So, something to wear. He never bought her clothing, which made her both curious and apprehensive.
The present was beautifully wrapped. William was very good at picking unusual wrapping paper and contrasting ribbon, the kind with a wire, molded into a perfect bow. He squared the corners of the paper, no crumpled edges or crinkles. He tucked the greeting card under the ribbon, always a card with the right sentiment, not too romantic, not too neutral.
Evelyn slipped the card from under the ribbon and held it a moment, suspended between fear of getting a generic Merry-Christmas-to-Anyone card or a sincerely romantic card that she would mistrust. But, true to form, he had picked a perfectly balanced, barely sentimental greeting: “You make Christmas special….” The signature line caught her breath: “I will love you forever.” She sat without moving, trying to decode the message, suspicious of what lay in wait beneath the words.
Gently and precisely, she pulled away the wrapping paper – white swans wearing Santa hats on a green background. Swans, she thought, how interesting. Prescient? A subconscious swan song? Opening the lid of the box, she moved aside the white tissue, which reminded her of her mother’s perfect gifts from Neiman Marcus all those years ago. She sat staring, no, more like fascinated, as she examined a pink short-sleeved, loosely knitted pullover with little knitted flowers all over, front and back. She held it up, turning it first one way then another. Again, the faint scent of vanilla. She carefully folded the sweater back into the box, managing to mouth “thank you” to William, and laid the box back under the Christmas tree.
She returned to the ottoman, where she sat watching, but not seeing, Roddy opening the pile of gifts on his wish list. Always analytical, Evelyn pondered the pink knitted sweater. Twenty-five years of marriage and still he didn’t have a clue about her. She was an Ann Taylor suede blazer kind of woman. Of course, she thought. He had taken someone to Christmas shop, another woman, younger, with a taste for floral pinks and scented candles. Evelyn wondered who the woman was this time.
With a flash of insight, she knew could not escape now; fate had intervened with its inevitability, not entirely unwelcome, like losing an ache one has gotten used to. Confronting William, she knew, would mean the end of everything. She had lived with his betrayals for years, so what was different now? Why today? The sweater. Not the garment itself, but the sheer audacity of it, like sharp scissors that snipped the remaining delicate thread of a relationship that had slowly unraveled around her.
Evelyn shrugged off the shawl as she stood and looked around the festive room, not allowing herself remorse or regrets. It was Christmas, and the severing would come later, after the presents, after the toasts and the eggnog. She straightened and breathed in the changes to come. As she turned, she bent and kissed her smiling son on the head, then moved resolutely to the kitchen.
Saturday, February 10, 2024
Monday, February 5, 2024
Hidden Fees - Kathy
Hidden Fees
Hidden fees lurk in mysterious
Nooks and crannies
Places and traces
Of where we are, have been
Or will be soon
Lurking on library cards,
Bank and Netflix accounts…
Ticketmaster, Phone bills,
Hotel rooms and recycling bins
Cruises, flights, and rail lines
Assembly, delivery, and haul aways
National, state, and community playgrounds
Owning a pet, riding a bike, driving a car
They’re not a tax they say
And
Nothing is free they say
And that is a truth
Snow - Kathy
My three phrases:
Writing on the wall
Dealing out the Deck
Diamond Miners
Ugh, it’s like Groundhog Day again!” thought Snow, waking at the crack of dawn to start her day. She got busy scrambling eggs, pouring orange juice, and setting the table. Then she rang the breakfast bell, and just like that seven little men marched down the stairs, each one nodding and greeting Snow with a “Good Morning, Snow!” They all took a seat at the long wooden table, said grace, and then dug in. Every day, every day was the same. And despite adoring these little men who saved her life, and kept her safe, she wished for something more. She wasn’t sure if this was better or worse than putting up with her annoyingly jealous and dangerous stepmom, but she supposed being alive and rather bored was better than dead. After all, the little group of diamond miners kept her busy taking care of them, and they protected her in their small den of a home.
Day after day she cooked, cleaned and scrubbed laundry for the little guys, while they dug through the nearby mountain digging up diamonds and selling them to Sir George. Sir George, a giant among the mountain people, not only traded gold for money, but collected taxes, carried the mail, and delivered messages from the Queen. Snow and the miners considered Sir George a friend they could trust, as he was the only other person who knew where Snow resided. For if the Queen knew, Snow’s life would be in danger.
The little diamond miners marched out the door that morning chanting “Hi Ho, Hi ho, it’s off to work we go,” and Snow got busy in her usual way by clearing the dishes, making the beds, and singing to the woodland creatures.
While gathering flowers, Snow heard hoofbeats nearing the cottage. She darted behind a wooden fence and peeked around the corner. It was only Sir George. He dismounted, tied his white stallion to the hitching rail and wrapped on the door. I’m over her Sir, said Snow walking around the fence. He turned toward her and lowered his head. Immediately Snow knew something was wrong. “What is it, Sir?” she asked.
“I’m afraid the writing is on the wall this time, Snow. The Queen is sending out an army of soldiers looking for you. Her plans are to lock you up in the tower until she can send you away forever, or perhaps even worse!”
Snow shivered, “I’ve known this day would come, what shall we do?.” She sat down on a log, rested her head in her hands and began to think. Sir George joined her.
“Well, let’s deal out the cards in our deck…the queen wants you gone. She’s so very jealous of your youthful beauty, dangerously so” he began, “And she will eventually find you - she has an army of soldiers,” he continued, “She is not afraid to use magical spells; remember what happened to her sister…ugh.” They both shuddered just thinking about her poor sister, now a toad in the castle pond. “What else do we know?”
“Well,” added Snow, “My little friends have collected so many diamonds, we’re absolutely rich beyond belief, maybe that will help, could we pay her off?”
“That’s it!” shouted Sir George. “The Queen is in such debt, perhaps we could pay her a hefty sum and promise her you would never enter her kingdom again.”
“ Yes!” nodded Snow. “I am happier here, I just get a bit bored, but I suppose it’s better than dead, right?” Snow didn’t sound all that excited, but rather reserved to a future of routine chores and singing to birds and squirrels.
Sir George turned to Snow and took her hands in his. “My dear Snow,” he started. “I’ve been in love with you since the day we met. What I haven’t told you is that when my contract is up with the Queen, I’ll be returning to Hampshire, where I will take over the kingdom from my retiring father. It’s beautiful there…mountains, ocean, forests, and the most wonderful and happy people. You would love it there. Would you, I mean could you consider…” Sir George looked into Snow’s eyes, she was looking up at him full of anticipation, a bit of confusion, but oh so beautifully happy.
“Yes…” she encouraged.
“Will you become my wife and join me?” he finally asked.
There was no question, Snow jumped up, looked deeper into his eyes and just like that, planted a kiss right on Sir George’s lips. Birds sang, squirrels jumped from tree to tree, and the seven little diamond miners came marching around the bend carrying seven buckets full of diamonds.
What happened next? Well, the seven little men loved Snow and knew she’d be happy with Sir George. They didn’t really need a lot of money anyway and were happy to pay off the Queen for Snow. The queen was just as greedy as she was jealous. She took the diamonds, Snow signed the contract banning her from the Queen’s kingdom and the next week, Snow and Sir George were married and settled into the castle in Hampshire. The little diamond miners visited frequently, always happy to see their dear friends. And the Queen? She lived miserably ever after.
Friday, February 2, 2024
First Love - Marc
FIRST LOVE
Suddenly thrust
unexpectedly
To where time does not exist
basking in feelings
Long forgotten
I find myself invincible
Untouched by seasons gone by
And then you are here
a gasp leaves my throat
Or is it a sob
for what was lost
Pulled away; no not yet
I did not warn you
Of your tragedy to come
diminishing you forever
Left with memories
like ashes
Falling through my fingers
only the memory
Of that summer
when you gently
Helped a boy become a man
The Edge - Marc
THE EDGE
The door slams
making clear
For the first time
someone so dear
Has gone for the last time
Like a brooding fog
silence hangs in the air
Memories whirl
while at the door you stare
The distance between
then and now is so small
Standing at the edge
listening to the past call
The closed door
will become
and ending and beginning
tomorrow
But now I am in this netherworld
of change and sorrow